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20 September 2010 @ 01:45 am
MAKE HIM PAY (homestuck fancomic)  
> Introduce the stupid comic.

This began as just an attempt to contribute to the many awesome fancomics people did for how the Eridan vs. Sollux throwdown went down. I expected maaaaybe 12 panels for this. I got 30 somehow. Um, extremely image heavy and I apologize in advance. Characters are not mine, just borrowed from Andrew Hussie. Link at the bottom to the original source material.

OTHER CREDITS: Music by the amazing azremodehar, background for Fef's room from Dozaloz on Deviantart.


[S] Make Him Pay






oh gog no


> this wasn't supposed to happen - she wasn't supposed to get hurt


fef please be okay please

> please


> Make him pay.


cA: fef wwhy

cC: Don't ask me t)(at. Don't act like you don't know. Look w)(at you did to Sollux!!

cA: hes just a fucking gutterblood its his fault for acting like hes wworthy of


cC: you wreck everyt)(ing about my life t)(at isn't about YOU! My w)(ole life )(as been entirely about making sure your body count is AS LOW AS POSSIBL-E! OUR -ENTIR-E RAC-E IS DOWN TO TW-ELV-E, AND YOU STILL MANAG-E TO CULL IT FURT)(-ER W)(-EN I L-EAV-E YOU ALON-E! I. CAN'T. DO. IT. ANYMOR---E!

cC: -Even if t)(e rest of my life is minutes, it's MY LIF-E NOW!!

cC: "w)(y?" "W)(Y"?

cC: because I loat)(e you.

[S] Dynasty That Wasn't


> He's gone. They both are.

> And soon, you will be too.

> You aren't okay with a lot of things, but you're surprisingly okay with this. It isn't a bad way to go. As long as the others can go on and survive, you think you did a pretty decent job for an empress that never was.

> And it isn't like yours would be the first dynasty that imploded between a clash of the matesprit and kismesis alignments.

> ... Huh, that's kind of funny. You did feel something more vibrant for that jerk after all... it just wasn't the quadrant he wanted.

[S] Waking Dream



tA: feferii- feferii, calm down, you're ok.

tA: thank gog, two, becau2e iit wa2 a paiin two get here.

cC: You're okay! AGAIN! T)(ANK GOODN-ESS!

tA: ye2, we're all ok, but we have two get back a2 2oon a2 po22iible. the other2 need u2.

cC: ... all?

> oh hell no





> OK fine


tA: feferii, 2top! don't do thii2! iif you kiill hiim thii2 tiime, iit'2 for keep2, and we need all of u2 two 2tand a chance agaiin2t the black kiing!

tA: plea2e, feferii, thiink of the re2t of u2!

tA: thiink of me!


> You realize Sollux is right, of course. That's one of the reasons why you like him as much as you do. He thinks ahead about things like this.

> No matter how much you hate Eridan right now, he's still one of the last pieces of home left, one of your oldest friends, and... you'd never forgive yourself if you killed him for real. Not to mention the others will need him, his strength. If you can't do this for them, what kind of empress would you have made?

> ... that doesn't mean it hurts any less.

> How much he claims to care about you.

> How little he actually does.

tA: come on, let'2 go. ii know the way.

> Go win this thing.

> oh hell yes.

> HOME[stuck]
Azyazremodehar on September 25th, 2010 02:02 pm (UTC)
>Azy: Grin like a doofus.
the Antisocial Little Ice Queen: KHR: Fancy meeting you here baby~vaultedthewall on September 25th, 2010 10:49 pm (UTC)
> Kels: Let fame go do your head. Become a diva. Fail hard. Become humble again!
Thank you for cheering me on, Azy! AND THE MUSIC! That is seriously amazing~!
Azyazremodehar on September 25th, 2010 11:09 pm (UTC)
> Azy: Flail like a dork.
I'm just glad you liked it! ._____.;;;
(Anonymous) on September 25th, 2010 04:23 pm (UTC)
> Dete: Fondly regard Comic

Just... wow.

You are a great artist. I like the storyline. I like how you took a one off image (Fish Face Harry Potter whose name I cannot recall shooting at Sollux)and turned it into this semi-grand story.

the Antisocial Little Ice Queen: Bleach: Hold mevaultedthewall on September 25th, 2010 10:50 pm (UTC)
ERIDAN! AKA Hipster Troll, Harry Potter, etc. YES! Thank you!
mattgcnmattgcn on September 25th, 2010 05:19 pm (UTC)
AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME saved all these images together they are awesome

I hope Andrew sees this
the Antisocial Little Ice Queen: MSPA: Welcome to mysteryvaultedthewall on September 25th, 2010 10:51 pm (UTC)
I AM A LITTLE NERVOUS AT THE PROSPECT, ACTUALLY. But - if he doesn't think it's entirely stupid, I'd be so happy. Really, I love that so many people have enjoyed this so far.
beru_beru: vriskaberu_beru on September 25th, 2010 08:32 pm (UTC)

this is so awesome! :D
it's too bad you didn't join the forum when art team applications were open because you are able to capture the characters' essences perfectly!!!!!!!! :D
the Antisocial Little Ice Queen: TXT: EXCITEMENT!vaultedthewall on September 25th, 2010 10:53 pm (UTC)
Aw, thank you!! That means a lot to me! Really, I'm just so happy that everyone's liked it so much so far. The fact that people other than me can get enjoyment out of it means a lot.
Owl: RUFIObunowl on September 25th, 2010 09:58 pm (UTC)

/added to memories

so awesome, so very awesome.
the Antisocial Little Ice Queen: Avatar: vaultedthewall on September 25th, 2010 10:55 pm (UTC)
(RUUUFIOOOO! Möbius double icon reach-around actor reference!)

Thank you! :D
Howw do I livve wwithout you ✖: Ryoji - :Dampora on September 25th, 2010 10:14 pm (UTC)
Commenting just to let you know this is absolutely amazing, for real

I've been stalking it on mspachan since you first put it up, so yes. Haha, I commented so many times while anon HERE I AM NOT ANON FOR ONCE
the Antisocial Little Ice Queen: MSPA: We are  making this hapenvaultedthewall on September 25th, 2010 10:58 pm (UTC)
Thank you!! Really, for all the early comments and everything! I tend to let procrastination or my own self-esteem kill most of my projects (I am a Pisces. We are all crazy.) so the fact that people were telling me they liked it and that they were looking forward to it early on helped me so much. ♥
Azyazremodehar on September 25th, 2010 11:14 pm (UTC)

........just sayin'.

You know I u bb.
Minardiiminardii on September 26th, 2010 06:00 pm (UTC)
Oh wow, this is crazy awesome, you did a really really good job on it! The emotions are palpable, the expressions superb.

I can't help but feel bad for Eridan here, too. Especially the panel after the "Hell no!", where he has that "Oh my.. Hi.." look. Embarrassed to be there, and then cowering from super Fef!
(After looking at that panel again, I just now noticed he was completely in the shadow of the room, except for his hand. Nice touch!)

... /end gushing, sorry!
Rafira: P4MCrafira on September 27th, 2010 09:36 am (UTC)
here from the fora. This is. the fucking. jfiserdjgifsjg. blew my mind. <3.
I'm not actually a shark: a concern-worthy concept of friendshiprayemars on October 2nd, 2010 12:47 am (UTC)
Hi! I am a total stranger who found this through Twitter, but I just had to tell you how incredibly awesome this is. You have single-handedly made me feel bad for Eridan, madame. Thank you for making this!
Li: fangirlllyse on October 8th, 2010 02:36 pm (UTC)
I-Is it bad that I want a [S] Have a threesome now?
always in distress mode•: pic#102663371moulin on October 9th, 2010 12:34 am (UTC)
Total stranger here, but you are amazing and this is amazing, never stop doing what you do.
(Anonymous) on October 9th, 2010 03:34 am (UTC)
This made me a good 47 different kinds of happy.
This shit is epic. Don't stop ever.
Kae: ☧ RG. » a sense of wondertafkae on October 9th, 2010 03:40 pm (UTC)
Uwaaaah, this is so awesome!!!

> Fav on DA + mem here
Rieka De-Volka: Brainride [Sollux]ranty_rie on November 20th, 2010 07:44 pm (UTC)
...that was epicly beautiful. Thank you for sharing!
(Anonymous) on January 23rd, 2011 04:14 am (UTC)
Ha ha! Retroactive irony.
Cameo/Hilary: attention Scoutcameoflage on March 11th, 2011 04:38 pm (UTC)

<3 Sollux. And Murderous Feferi is awesome and why did I never consider the possibility that one or more of them died and came back as their dreamselves in the original dueling incident? Also it's cool to see art of the troll dreamselves at all, canon doesn't have very much of that.

lunaitc on March 14th, 2011 06:33 pm (UTC)
You're not an official artist on Homestuck but the hack responsible for MARCH is. There is no fucking justice in the world.
Niena Ramil: IT IS NOT GRUBSAUCEniena on June 20th, 2011 01:02 pm (UTC)
I had to read this after finding another person who thought Feferi deserved to die in the comic. I still love this. <3
delta_mai: Vriskadelta_mai on September 25th, 2011 10:10 pm (UTC)
This is INCREDIBLE and you are wonderful for making it :D
Rowaninvaderbox on September 30th, 2011 11:11 am (UTC)
i love this so much.
D.A.K.chainey_clink on May 5th, 2012 06:07 am (UTC)
BUT THEN I WAS REALLY HAPPY??? oh god eri's just staring up at sollux like aaaaaaaaa

okay yes

this is really good
Runespoorrunespoor7 on May 19th, 2012 09:27 am (UTC)
This is absolutely gorgeous. Their faces, and the framing of each panel... Gorgeous.
Sarah FaySarah Fay on October 19th, 2012 06:36 pm (UTC)
holy glob
at the end, sollux is all superman XD
blithnorf on April 29th, 2017 03:27 am (UTC)
I'm surprised no Homestuck dubbers have done this comic. It's amazing! I'd never be able to do anything like this. The art is wonderful, the story left me and tears, and it fits in so well, it could actually be in Homestuck! Well done.

P.S, I want to dub this reaaalllyy badly, but I don't have any decent editing software and no decent recording software, so damn.

I won't be surprised if you never read this. After all, this comic was made about 6 and a half years ago.